I need a second set of eyes for my Bird Dog site

Comments(8)

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  JohnLocke2nd February, 2003

  Vic,
  
  Bring the house up front on the site, have the Bird Dog more in the background pointing to the house.
  
  You want people to know you are dealing in houses not dogs.
  
  This is a suggestion, I know you are working hard, so take it as a comment from someone who wants to see you succeed.
  
  John $Cash$ Locke

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  realestateprofit2nd February, 2003

  Hrrmm, didn't think about that. Been so busy getting everything together that that never crossed my mind.
  
  This is exactly the kind of feedback I need.
  
  Good eyes John!
  
  Vic
  
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  Actually...I'm thinking of using a different look to it. Not quite sure yet. I've developed the business card that i'm planning on using for investors. I'd like to see the same look on my site. Still pondering though. if you'd like to see it too, it's at:
  
  http://209.133.244.239/draft2.gif[ Edited by realestateprofit on Date 02/02/2003 ]

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  JohnMichael2nd February, 2003

  realestateprofit
  
  I agree with John L, I would loose the Dog and keep the house background
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  realestateprofit2nd February, 2003

  Grr..posted before I made my edits...!
  
  Look above at the previous post and tell me what you think about a design simliar to the new business card?
  
  Thanks for the input!
  
  Vic

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  HoGiHung2nd February, 2003

  I like the layout and colors you have choosen. Nice on the eyes and not a lot of "garbage" on the screen.
  
  I'm just not sure I'd have the quote you have of:
  
  "Excellence in matching Home Buyers and Sellers"
  
  Sounds like a Real Estate Agent to me. Just something to think about.
  
  Ho...

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  drgnstr3rd February, 2003

  realestateprofit,
  Nice page, navigates well, looks nice! Maybe a email address on contact page? Just a thought.
  
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  Angelicia3rd February, 2003

  realestateprofit,
  hello, i think the site is user friendly and informative. when it opened it gave the appearance of a legit site instead of a scam which when i look for info is important to me so i presume it will be important to others. when i feel like some thing is just hype i usually move on to the next site. advise i can give is to make sure that since the average homeowner doesn't know what a birddog is then there should be something searchable written in your title and/or description. ie. use birddogs - sell your home quick. well anyway, i think it is great and i pray the Lord blesses you in your persiuts.
  
  
  
  
  
  
  
  www.itawc57@aol.com [ Edited by Angelicia on Date 02/03/2003 ]

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  realestateprofit3rd February, 2003

  Hi everyone. Thanks for your valuable inputs. I'll make good use of it.
  
  Thanks!
  
  Vic